the idea was good but not really put together
i kind of understand what you were trying to communicate but you seemed to be lacking sense in some cases so it didnt seem coherent and at times i thought the idea wasnt even there. seemed like you were trying to be a little strange or out there in some parts by putting in random subtopics. this is all im going to say on the actual "story" though.
the graphics well... lets be honest werent up to par with some of the other flash's on here but kept a style throughought the entire move so they served their purpose to that extent. however like another reviewer said i think there could have been more frames in it to make it not so pupet like or linear.
the sound got anoying after awhile and seemed to loose emphisis every time it repeated. really i dont know what could make this better unless you took out the music and made it very quite so it still fit the mood and gave it a sense of awkwardness and kept questioning the situation.
the main char getting his hand cut in half reminded me of pans lybrinth but still felt its own in this animation and seemed strange at the same time because its not a common sequence in any genre that i know. hands being cut off are but being cut in half isnt as common but still not unheard of.
i did like that you had the two man playing with xbox controllers however. i didnt know that xbox had a game like that. [ im not a big fan of xbox, but im not a hater either im just saying that im not obsessed with them and im not a fanboy for or against them] see i think this is funny because in the last generation of game console the big system was ps2 and its controllers were used in advertising when people where playing video games but now it seems xbox took its place... although ps3 is poping up more and more.